Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am allergic to these little demons. I don't go out after dark. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Yes but don't get me wrong! (comma after 'Yes')

Now it mostly comes out at night when there is no more light? (Why a question mark, it doesn't ask a question, and in a few additional places.)

Yes a sacrifice but where is it source? (comma after 'Yes')

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023

Thanks Barbara for your review and I cleaned it up a bit.
(according to your specifications of course)
Doctor Ricky

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Easy. Got it from the beginning! Hate the little buggers. This is a fun but serious poem fully outlining the power this tiny thing has in our lives. Oh, that high-pitched whine in the dark!

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023

Thanks a lot Jacqueline for your time and review.
Doctor Ricky