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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your verse is a deeply emotional tribute to your mother captured by that beautiful image and conveyed through your evocative sentiments. The poignancy is in the letting go of the hand to continue her journey. Thanks for sharing, Michelle, Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Your verse is a deeply emotional tribute to your mother captured by that beautiful image and conveyed through your evocative sentiments. The poignancy is in the letting go of the hand to continue her journey. Thanks for sharing, Michelle, Take care Debbie
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for your encouragement and stars.
Comment from royowen
I love to see children praising God, they do it with such faith as little children always do, I lead these kids in worship in church, and I'm.truly blessed as I am with this fine post, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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I love to see children praising God, they do it with such faith as little children always do, I lead these kids in worship in church, and I'm.truly blessed as I am with this fine post, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your words and stars.
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Most welcome
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love passed from mother to daughter, same excitement and gentle touch that Is carried aa a blessed song to the new generation. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Love passed from mother to daughter, same excitement and gentle touch that Is carried aa a blessed song to the new generation. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the stars and words.
Comment from Sally Law
What a loving poem of your godly mother. A tender one of her, and her care for you. Precious, Michelle.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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What a loving poem of your godly mother. A tender one of her, and her care for you. Precious, Michelle.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your words and stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine poem Michelle but to be a sonnet you would need to use iambic pentameter and keep each line to 10 syllables. I enjoyed the sentiments here though, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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A fine poem Michelle but to be a sonnet you would need to use iambic pentameter and keep each line to 10 syllables. I enjoyed the sentiments here though, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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I followed the guide of 10 syllables for each line with abab cdcd efef gg.
Tell me more about the missing peace.
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Ok. Now I understand. It is the rhythm that I'm missing. I will try again.
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Yes Michelle, if you need any help with the metre, let me know in a private message x x x
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Thank you. I have an idea brewing for a sonnet and looked at your work to get the rhythm
I will let you know.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are lovely, engaging and creative. These words describe cherished moments, graceful smiles, and so much more with love. I found in this poem a beautiful description of a kind and loving mother. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is lovely and compliments the theme and words of this poem well. Great Poem!
Hi Michelle, hope you're having a great day!...Maria
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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The author's words are lovely, engaging and creative. These words describe cherished moments, graceful smiles, and so much more with love. I found in this poem a beautiful description of a kind and loving mother. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is lovely and compliments the theme and words of this poem well. Great Poem!
Hi Michelle, hope you're having a great day!...Maria
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much. I tried to make it a sonnet, however, but failed in that attempt.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Your words are as tender and loving for your mother as she was to you.
This is so beautiful and inspiring.
The picture compliments your words perfectly.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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Your words are as tender and loving for your mother as she was to you.
This is so beautiful and inspiring.
The picture compliments your words perfectly.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for your comments. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Loretta Bigg
This is very beautiful, showing the hands as loved ones, enemies, and friends, returning to the beginning. It was very well done. Thank you for sharing it with me.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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This is very beautiful, showing the hands as loved ones, enemies, and friends, returning to the beginning. It was very well done. Thank you for sharing it with me.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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Thank you. I'm so glad you saw the progression.
Comment from Sanku
Very touching tribute to your mother and what a picture ! inspiring tenderness.'my lovely hands now reach out for the Son' i liked this closing line very much.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Very touching tribute to your mother and what a picture ! inspiring tenderness.'my lovely hands now reach out for the Son' i liked this closing line very much.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you for seeing that in the ending. I appreciate it.
Comment from Bill Schott
This sonnet, My Mother's Hands, has the proper formatting and cherishes the hands of our moms, which comforted us for a lifetime and likely beyond...........................................................
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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This sonnet, My Mother's Hands, has the proper formatting and cherishes the hands of our moms, which comforted us for a lifetime and likely beyond...........................................................
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the stars. It was my first sonnet attempt.