Nature is Angry
That kind of morning10 total reviews
Comment from Barbara H.
The picture chosen was very effective. The white gray and black colors convey the
intensity of the storm overhead. The word BOOM written in all caps worked quite well. You could really swap the lines of the poem around in any order and have the same meaning. Did you intend to do it that way? If you did very clever!
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The picture chosen was very effective. The white gray and black colors convey the
intensity of the storm overhead. The word BOOM written in all caps worked quite well. You could really swap the lines of the poem around in any order and have the same meaning. Did you intend to do it that way? If you did very clever!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Great poem, conforms to the specified format. You have, in so few words, created the scary atmosphere of a thunderstorm,
My best wishes for the contest!!
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Great poem, conforms to the specified format. You have, in so few words, created the scary atmosphere of a thunderstorm,
My best wishes for the contest!!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful-- Rhymed 1-6-1 writing -- prompt entry for the Contest.
Good rhyme that doesn't sound forced. Nice presentation and imagery. I suggest you change the title to 'angry nature'. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Wonderful-- Rhymed 1-6-1 writing -- prompt entry for the Contest.
Good rhyme that doesn't sound forced. Nice presentation and imagery. I suggest you change the title to 'angry nature'. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 22-Jun-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We have been having some amazing thunder storms just now overnight and I have enjoying hearing them and knowing I am safe indoors! Good rhymes and sentiments here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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We have been having some amazing thunder storms just now overnight and I have enjoying hearing them and knowing I am safe indoors! Good rhymes and sentiments here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jun-2023
Comment from Lisasview
Great word use with perfect rhyme for this contest... 1-6-1
Really clever and the image is excellent..............................
Lisasview, new to this site
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Great word use with perfect rhyme for this contest... 1-6-1
Really clever and the image is excellent..............................
Lisasview, new to this site
Comment Written 22-Jun-2023
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, just love this. An excellent entry in this 1/6/1 poetry contest my friend, I love storms, the falling rain is positively empathetic with my emotions, a calming affect. Beautifully written, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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Heh heh, just love this. An excellent entry in this 1/6/1 poetry contest my friend, I love storms, the falling rain is positively empathetic with my emotions, a calming affect. Beautifully written, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
Comment from JSD
A good attempt to fit as much as possible into a mere eight syllables. My one thought is that your first and last words should be swapped around. But each to their own!
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A good attempt to fit as much as possible into a mere eight syllables. My one thought is that your first and last words should be swapped around. But each to their own!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent! Atmospheric, filling the senses with noise and darkness! I like this 1-6-1 enhanced by the image and fulfilling the brief with accurate syllable count. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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Excellent! Atmospheric, filling the senses with noise and darkness! I like this 1-6-1 enhanced by the image and fulfilling the brief with accurate syllable count. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
Comment from Paul Manton
Hello fellow writer. I was taught to count to seven after a lightning strike, for every mile away the storm was when the thunder clap came, so when the lightning and thunder came simultaneously, it was deafening, it was terrifying, and it blew up our television!
Your picture is perfect for this poem - and the poem encapsulates the experience - though for us, the 'boom' was in 'the room'!
My mother was terrified of storms, but I love them -she certainly experienced gloom whenever the possibility of a storm occurred.
Thanks for this explosive poem!
Paul
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Hello fellow writer. I was taught to count to seven after a lightning strike, for every mile away the storm was when the thunder clap came, so when the lightning and thunder came simultaneously, it was deafening, it was terrifying, and it blew up our television!
Your picture is perfect for this poem - and the poem encapsulates the experience - though for us, the 'boom' was in 'the room'!
My mother was terrified of storms, but I love them -she certainly experienced gloom whenever the possibility of a storm occurred.
Thanks for this explosive poem!
Paul
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
Comment from RodG
I really like the artwork chosen to illustrate your short poem.
Much conveyed in only eight syllables: the intensity of the storm and the gloomy aftermath for the Speaker. Rod
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I really like the artwork chosen to illustrate your short poem.
Much conveyed in only eight syllables: the intensity of the storm and the gloomy aftermath for the Speaker. Rod
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023