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Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Chapter 6"
Book 1, Misfits series
2 total reviews
Comment from
lancellot
A series of unfortunate events is the best way to describe what happened in this chapter, or perhaps, this is just how a young adult story should progress. I think you are doing a fine job, and the scenes play out like a tv show or movie.
Good job.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Comment from
Julie Lau
Well written, and the circumstances are well described, As it is the first time I've come across this story there is a big mystery element for me as well - I'll have to catch your next chapter to see what our heroine is going to change into... or will it just be a big pile of vomit? (sorry, kidding). JL
Comment Written 20-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review!
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