Summer dons fallow
Nurture vs nature5 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a deeply moving free write filled with ancient ritual and biblical references to make this unique and magical, much enjoyed, a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
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This is a deeply moving free write filled with ancient ritual and biblical references to make this unique and magical, much enjoyed, a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A failed or failing relationship analogous to the neglect of nature, once fruitful now barren. Your imagery is impressively done and my favourite stanzas second from the bottom and last vividly capture the regret that not enough was done to nurture this lost relationship. Thanks for sharing Debbie
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A failed or failing relationship analogous to the neglect of nature, once fruitful now barren. Your imagery is impressively done and my favourite stanzas second from the bottom and last vividly capture the regret that not enough was done to nurture this lost relationship. Thanks for sharing Debbie
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from Wendy G
A very thought provoking poem, and very thoughtfully written. The fallow unproductive land seems to reflect the relationship which has passed the joys and energy of sprinkler and summer. Regrets are expressed about the lack of ongoing care needed to help the relationship to flourish and the result is that It is not valued , a mere doormat.
Wendy
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A very thought provoking poem, and very thoughtfully written. The fallow unproductive land seems to reflect the relationship which has passed the joys and energy of sprinkler and summer. Regrets are expressed about the lack of ongoing care needed to help the relationship to flourish and the result is that It is not valued , a mere doormat.
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from royowen
You've included and woven into your great free verse poem, of course farmers these days fertilise their fields to death. The don't leave their fields fallow to recover properly I really enjoyed the great post, well doe, blessings Roy
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You've included and woven into your great free verse poem, of course farmers these days fertilise their fields to death. The don't leave their fields fallow to recover properly I really enjoyed the great post, well doe, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Summer Dons Fallow, seems to link the failing days of summer with its shortening hours, chilly, evenings, and withering flora to a relationship which has ended poorly and sadly. Interesting.
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This poem, Summer Dons Fallow, seems to link the failing days of summer with its shortening hours, chilly, evenings, and withering flora to a relationship which has ended poorly and sadly. Interesting.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023