Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

Your poem describes the spring I'm having this year. It has been a rough year for the hay fever. If I'm not battling sneezing then it is the running eyes. Best of luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 31-May-2023

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reply by the author on 31-May-2023

I completely get it, believe me. I have gone through a session of antibiotics and 3 1/2 boxes of sinus pills in the last 2 weeks. Totally ridiculous!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A fun (if not for you!) verse about what are obviously the horrors of this allergy. Your verse skips along in tune with Spring. There are some bumps along the way and it might be worth reading it out loud to get more regularity of meter (you get an idea by counting syllables). But thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 31-May-2023

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reply by the author on 31-May-2023

Thank you so much, Debbie. I will definitely take another run at it and try to get it to flow better. I appreciate you letting me know.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I know the feeling hay fever can be a trial and it sounds like you are suffering from more than just pollen problems here, sorry to hear you are sick. Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-May-2023

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reply by the author on 31-May-2023

Thank you so much, my friend. I definitely am suffering. I actually had to get on antibiotics this past week for a stupid sinus infection.