Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Boy, can you write a story or what? The story or saga is completely engaging. You never slow down on the action. It just keeps building. Grand writing. Great pictures. No Need To Reply Karen

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2023

Comment from Emerie Mao

Excellent

I really enjoyed this read. I loved all of the details within this writing piece and I believe that it is an amazing piece of writing in general. I hope that you have a blessed day.
-Emerie

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Thank you so much, Emerie :) I appreciate your awesome feedback and generous stars. You made my day! I hope to hear back from you again.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

Sorry, I have no more sixes or you'd have one. I enjoyed this tension filled chapter, and of course you left me dangling as usual. You did a great job. Enjoy your day. Shirley

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Thank you so much, Shirley :) I always look forward to reading your feedback, hoping you'll enjoy another Breedline adventure. More to come soon. And yes, the tension is building. I see a battle coming up.

Thanks again for your kind words and generous stars. I appreciate it!

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

You crafted this chapter in a masterful way. Everything in there is great: great storyline, awesome plot and premise, strong dialogue and the lines have fluidity which makes the reader want to read more and more. I really enjoyed it. Looking forward to read more of you!!

 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Awww... Thank you, Mario :) So thrilled you liked the chapter! You made my day! This is what keeps me motivated to keep on writing. I appreciate your kind words and generous stars. Looking forward to hearing from you again.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

What a fascination episode Shana. Jace meets Mia, and is told she's a half breed, and as is his tendency jumps to conclusions, but Tim explains that Angel is likewise a half breed. Mia's there because of Sebastian Crowe is probably after her. But then they work out that Tessa could likewise be in danger. Beautifully written episode dear Shana, great episode, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 29-May-2023

Thank you, my friend :) I appreciate your positive feedback. It's coming along, bit by bit. I will certainly be glad when this one is complete, so I can get it published on Amazon. Every time I finish a book, it's like having a new child. Only other authors, like us, can understand.

Thanks for always supporting me.
Always your fan,
Shana :)