No New Ideas
This was a challenge.5 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I am so glad you tried this challenge! I didn't see it as I rarely do the contest created by members. You did a fine job with the challenge.
Anyway, I was checking your profile for news of you. I know the Spokane fires cover a wide area and hope you and your family are safe! ð???ð???
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
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I am so glad you tried this challenge! I didn't see it as I rarely do the contest created by members. You did a fine job with the challenge.
Anyway, I was checking your profile for news of you. I know the Spokane fires cover a wide area and hope you and your family are safe! ð???ð???
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
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I haven't been online in a while. We had a suicide death in the family and life has been a mess. Still grieving here and will be for a while yet. Thanks so much for reviewing. Fires have been away from the city here so just smoke and ash in the air to complicate life.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
This poem uses the words given and reminds us how hard it is to write and how sometimes our muses don't answer our calls so we try our best to find inspiration so we don't lie.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Hi,
This poem uses the words given and reminds us how hard it is to write and how sometimes our muses don't answer our calls so we try our best to find inspiration so we don't lie.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 30-May-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Thank you so very much for your kind review.
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You are most kindly welcome, Annie.
Joan
Comment from Andrea Kepple
A very creative way of using the required words to convey a specific scene. The used picture compliments the poem. Best of luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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A very creative way of using the required words to convey a specific scene. The used picture compliments the poem. Best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-It is an interesting prompt.
-You did a good job with the poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-The rhymes fit well with your description.
-I like the line about "old ideas."
-Your concluding three lines are also good.
-There is nothing wrong with your last line,
but consider: Smiling, I chose a word and lied.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-It is an interesting prompt.
-You did a good job with the poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-The rhymes fit well with your description.
-I like the line about "old ideas."
-Your concluding three lines are also good.
-There is nothing wrong with your last line,
but consider: Smiling, I chose a word and lied.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thanks for the tip. I used it and works much better.
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You are very welcome, and I am glad it was helpful.
Comment from kahpot
What an excellent use of these words for this prompt, it is hard sometimes to find a subject to write about, these prompts do give us ideas, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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What an excellent use of these words for this prompt, it is hard sometimes to find a subject to write about, these prompts do give us ideas, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
