One Man's Calling
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "One Man's Calling, ch 10A"Following God
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Comment from lyenochka
It's great that Ben has come at the right time to help with a healing prayer and also to help fix an environmental problem!
Simple plurals for these two last names:
A reacquainting with the Tolsen's allowed him to meet (Tolsens)
"Yes, the Simmerman's across the river there." (Simmermans)
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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It's great that Ben has come at the right time to help with a healing prayer and also to help fix an environmental problem!
Simple plurals for these two last names:
A reacquainting with the Tolsen's allowed him to meet (Tolsens)
"Yes, the Simmerman's across the river there." (Simmermans)
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you. What I had in my head did not match what I put on paper. Thank you.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very good chapter with lots of changes going on. Unfortunately, the miners are right about the dam breaking in spring. Does Ben lead them in religious services? That's the only reason I see for the wives to accept the saloon girl.
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Very good chapter with lots of changes going on. Unfortunately, the miners are right about the dam breaking in spring. Does Ben lead them in religious services? That's the only reason I see for the wives to accept the saloon girl.
Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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All Ben's rescued girls change their ways.
Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. It was a pleasure to read from beginning to end. I like the way Ben solved the new mom's problem. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a bless day.
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. It was a pleasure to read from beginning to end. I like the way Ben solved the new mom's problem. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a bless day.
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from Jim Wile
As Ben continues his calling, he now arrives at a scene of impending doom for the town at the hands of a sworn enemy of his. Seems like he attracts as much evil as good as he travels through the west, but I guess that is the fate of those who follow the path of Christ.
You're doing a wonderful job with this interesting and wholesome western tale, Wayne, of a good man on a mission. Jim
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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As Ben continues his calling, he now arrives at a scene of impending doom for the town at the hands of a sworn enemy of his. Seems like he attracts as much evil as good as he travels through the west, but I guess that is the fate of those who follow the path of Christ.
You're doing a wonderful job with this interesting and wholesome western tale, Wayne, of a good man on a mission. Jim
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Thank you. I hope the next part doesn't disappoint. I'm a bit nervous about it.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
It looks like they need to find a couple of sticks of dynamite.LOL Isn't it amazing what an evil person can think up to bring devastation and unhappiness everywhere they go? That Salinger fellow is pure evil and he needs to be dealt with. I'm sure with God's help, Ben will be the one to do that. Well done Wayne. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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It looks like they need to find a couple of sticks of dynamite.LOL Isn't it amazing what an evil person can think up to bring devastation and unhappiness everywhere they go? That Salinger fellow is pure evil and he needs to be dealt with. I'm sure with God's help, Ben will be the one to do that. Well done Wayne. Nancy:)
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Wendy G
Ben is certainly being used by God wherever he goes. Salinger will try to destroy him along with God's work, but none can defeat God. An interesting and quite different story, which I am enjoying.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Ben is certainly being used by God wherever he goes. Salinger will try to destroy him along with God's work, but none can defeat God. An interesting and quite different story, which I am enjoying.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
It seems God has given Ben the gift of healing. I'm sure he will know what do about the river being dammed up and the possiblity of the town being destroyed. Salinger would like to see him destoryed. He isn't having much luck keeping girls with Ben around.
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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It seems God has given Ben the gift of healing. I'm sure he will know what do about the river being dammed up and the possiblity of the town being destroyed. Salinger would like to see him destoryed. He isn't having much luck keeping girls with Ben around.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Hah! (Salinger's girls)
Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from royowen
I love the way you finished this episode, and the way it's leading to real purpose for Ben's existence. It's an amazing thing when someone apprehends the calling of God, and I hope in this myself, beautifully written Wayne, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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I love the way you finished this episode, and the way it's leading to real purpose for Ben's existence. It's an amazing thing when someone apprehends the calling of God, and I hope in this myself, beautifully written Wayne, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
I could almost do a repeat of last week's review. It's all on Ben. He silently drifts through the pages of your novel depositing God in one form or another. One feels he is God-infused. And now we have the underpinnings of mammon in the person of Mason Salinger and are left on another of your famous cliffhangers.
Jay
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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I could almost do a repeat of last week's review. It's all on Ben. He silently drifts through the pages of your novel depositing God in one form or another. One feels he is God-infused. And now we have the underpinnings of mammon in the person of Mason Salinger and are left on another of your famous cliffhangers.
Jay
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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lol
Thank you for your kind review.
And thank you immensely for the six stars!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Ben continues his travels doing good works and always doing labouring rather than relying on manna from Heaven. Miraculously, by praying to God, he helps Clara produce milk for her new-born. His latest encounter with the miners has revealed a problem with the river drying up and a dam being built. The worry now is that it might burst and wipe out the community. This chapter is a lengthy one and moves at pace, the theme of Ben's faith-inspired actions continuing to run throughout. An enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Ben continues his travels doing good works and always doing labouring rather than relying on manna from Heaven. Miraculously, by praying to God, he helps Clara produce milk for her new-born. His latest encounter with the miners has revealed a problem with the river drying up and a dam being built. The worry now is that it might burst and wipe out the community. This chapter is a lengthy one and moves at pace, the theme of Ben's faith-inspired actions continuing to run throughout. An enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.