Reviews from

Beloved Children

I love them so much.

5 total reviews 
Comment from JLR
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Dear poet, Three very nice and rhythmic lines to complete the task of successfully writing the proscribed 5/5/5 Good success in the contest and write often. You are already a winner.

 Comment Written 05-May-2023

reply by the author on 05-May-2023
    Thanks!
reply by the author on 05-May-2023
    Hope my poem does well in the contest. I will be a winner if you will help in in the contest please.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very sweet and nice 5-5-5 poem you have penned about children. You used very good rhyming words and very good descriptive words with a lovely picture. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 05-May-2023

reply by the author on 05-May-2023
    Thanks!
reply by the author on 05-May-2023
    Thanks for your kind review I was hoping you would really love this poem.
reply by Teri7 on 05-May-2023
    you are so welcome! Just so you know I do love your writing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-May-2023
    I think you voted for me.
reply by Teri7 on 05-May-2023
    I did on that one!
reply by the author on 05-May-2023
    😊
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent 5-5-5 poem for the contest with a theme
many will relate to on fanstory and the nice addition
of the three rhymes.
The picture is a perfect match.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 04-May-2023

reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Thanks!
Comment from Aaron Milavec
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Well done. Pic is perfect for your poem.

Can't find any way to make it better. You're great.

Peace and joy,
Aaron

PS: Can't find any way to make it better.

 Comment Written 04-May-2023

reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Thanks!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Kids are sweet and innocent and I adore them, my Grandkids are a joy to have around and infuse me with youth whenever I see them, I enjoyed your words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-May-2023

reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Thanks!