Tales of our Times
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Roots"Collection of short stories
4 total reviews
Comment from Lynar
I was surprised at the story ending. Somehow made me ponder a possible DNA relationship with your relative son. It kept my interest from start to end. No more to add. Exceptional.
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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I was surprised at the story ending. Somehow made me ponder a possible DNA relationship with your relative son. It kept my interest from start to end. No more to add. Exceptional.
Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Great review & thanks again for 6 twinkling stars. zanya
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It was my pleasure, Zanya
Comment from Elizabeth Henderson
Sweet story with a surprise ending. Well written. My only advice would be that you'd describe the house more to give the reader as sense of why the owner loved it so much. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Sweet story with a surprise ending. Well written. My only advice would be that you'd describe the house more to give the reader as sense of why the owner loved it so much. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Great review and good advice zanya
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a well written prose with good structure, making it an enjoyable read with satisfying conclusion. Matt's sense of belonging and affinity with the house are well described and you empathise with his need to uproot, thus providing catharsis in the ending. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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This is a well written prose with good structure, making it an enjoyable read with satisfying conclusion. Matt's sense of belonging and affinity with the house are well described and you empathise with his need to uproot, thus providing catharsis in the ending. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Great review zanya
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This story was compelling me to read till the end and it didn't disappoint; it's a creative way to answer the, "I Found It," prompt. It's written clearly and with much imagery and descriptions which help a reader to keep up. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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This story was compelling me to read till the end and it didn't disappoint; it's a creative way to answer the, "I Found It," prompt. It's written clearly and with much imagery and descriptions which help a reader to keep up. Best wishes!
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Superb detailed review zanya