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This Time Just For Fun

You're fun!

2 total reviews 
Comment from shelley kaye
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lol yea, i'd classify this as a just for fun 5-7-5!
and the theme as well LOL!

good one - great connection between all three lines
totally cool picture

one suggestion i have is maybe try a black background and a gold font to blend in with the pic? just a thought ;)


thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
    Thank you for a great review!
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This 5-7-5, This Time Just for Fun, has the proper formatting and finds a way to separate the "just for fun" kissing from the more serious endeavors.
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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
    There are more serious endeavors implied in this?
    (said tongue-in-cheek)
    Thank you for the review.