Where, Oh where
embarrassing9 total reviews
Comment from Cherish Adams
That is hilarious and so relatable! Great job creating something so funny and short that some of us laughed out loud. Loved it.
Cherish
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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That is hilarious and so relatable! Great job creating something so funny and short that some of us laughed out loud. Loved it.
Cherish
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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well, I can't tell you how much I appreciate that! I had two people tell me it wasn't funny at all. You have certainly made me feel better!
Katharine
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Did your sandal land on someone's head; probably you weren't sitting in the balcony. The movies always have an after effect of relaxation; I bet some even fall asleep.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Did your sandal land on someone's head; probably you weren't sitting in the balcony. The movies always have an after effect of relaxation; I bet some even fall asleep.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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no balcony. No, it just disappeared. took me forever to find it.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, thank you for sharing. interesting entry for the Write a Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.
Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Good job,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Hello, thank you for sharing. interesting entry for the Write a Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.
Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Good job,
Gypsy
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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thank you, Gypsy.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Nice one indeed. It actually happens more than people can think. And can relate to it. It was funny for the friends who accompanied me but not for me!!!
Good luck for the contest
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Nice one indeed. It actually happens more than people can think. And can relate to it. It was funny for the friends who accompanied me but not for me!!!
Good luck for the contest
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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isn't that always the way!
Thanks for your good wishes,
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A good inventive 3-liner enhanced by perfect image. The verse perfectly adheres to the requirements but, while I found the post light-hearted and imaginative, the humour wasn't quite sufficient for me in this category. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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A good inventive 3-liner enhanced by perfect image. The verse perfectly adheres to the requirements but, while I found the post light-hearted and imaginative, the humour wasn't quite sufficient for me in this category. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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sorry
Comment from kiwisteveh
Hmmm... I understand the embarrassment, but I'm struggling to get the humour and since that was the whole point of the contest I've docked you a star. Is that too harsh?
Now if your sandal had ended up creating some sort of chaos in the theatre, or if your search for it meant you spilled your drink in someone's lap, that might have been funny. Perhaps the brevity of the format prevented you from giving more detail and hence the required chuckle.
Steve
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Hmmm... I understand the embarrassment, but I'm struggling to get the humour and since that was the whole point of the contest I've docked you a star. Is that too harsh?
Now if your sandal had ended up creating some sort of chaos in the theatre, or if your search for it meant you spilled your drink in someone's lap, that might have been funny. Perhaps the brevity of the format prevented you from giving more detail and hence the required chuckle.
Steve
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, and in the dark we cannot see anything until the lights come up! But you can't go home with one shoe! Ha ha ha, a fun post, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Oh dear, and in the dark we cannot see anything until the lights come up! But you can't go home with one shoe! Ha ha ha, a fun post, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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thanks, Dolly! I appreciate that. You wouldn't believe the people who have just flat out said it wasn't funny and gave me fours. Oh well. I guess it wasn't.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh-oh! And it's dark in the movie theatre so I'm hoping the narrator finds her sandal! I can imagine it's more comfortable without it but searching for it would be a pain. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Oh-oh! And it's dark in the movie theatre so I'm hoping the narrator finds her sandal! I can imagine it's more comfortable without it but searching for it would be a pain. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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thanks, Helen. It's fun.
Comment from RodG
This shortie made me chuckle because I remember losing a shoe (more than once) while watching a movie in a theater with rows of seats that slanted downwards. If I was lucky, I'd find it between showings after the audience left. Rod
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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This shortie made me chuckle because I remember losing a shoe (more than once) while watching a movie in a theater with rows of seats that slanted downwards. If I was lucky, I'd find it between showings after the audience left. Rod
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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You, too, huh?
and my companions thought it was funny - no help, atall.
Thanks for reading.
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My friends liked to release tennis balls by their feet during the show and after the show see if they could find them near the screen.
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sounds like a boy thing. ho ho