Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing and I enjoyed reading.

You know that I'm still missing you. (omit 'that' it's not needed)

Missing you can't You see? (comma after 'you')

Then I ask you God for the reason why? (comma after 'you')

So. all I can do is write these beautiful words that rhyme. (comma after 'So')

Know rhe reason why? (the)
My lost Love grows deeper by.the day. (omit the period after 'by' and put in a space)

And.I try to fight back the Endless Tears but they just won't go away? (omit the period after 'And' and put in a space and you need a comma after 'Tears')

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023

I clean this up a little bit.
And, corrected it.
And, thank you Barbara for stopping by my
"Star Clusters!"
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from Douglas Goff

Exceptional

This is very good and profound. I think it could be of great help to all in mourning and suffering from loss.

You are a talented man Doc. Thank you for sharing your big brain with us.
D

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023

Thanks Douglas and I get this all the time.
Doctor Ricky1024

reply by Douglas Goff on 13-Apr-2023

The ?you are a talented man part? ?. Kidding. I know what you meant.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I know my sister lost her little boy when he was 18 months old, he died in her arms after needing a transplant liver, but none was forthcoming, I don't think I've heard her complain once Ricky, blessings Roy
Typo: One (nighyt) to the next.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

Sorry to hear about your sister's loss it's hard to be there with that child and then have to go on.
Thanks Roy have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky

reply by royowen on 15-Apr-2023

Thanks Ricky,

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

Thank you for this piece of work. You have written obviously a hard one piece fiction or non cannot be pleasant so thanks again!
Once again I find your homes and your sore is and everything you write to be very intriguing to say the least. You are obviously a professional and practice hand with a whole load of talent what a combination!
I find no grammatical issues with your writing That's what happens When you get to be as much of a pro as you are!
Great submission hope you have a great day!

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023

Thanks Lea.
Trying my best to entertain, satisfy, and teach.
Doctor Ricky1024