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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Traveling Man"Poetry from Another Planet
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Comment from Julie G1
Well written. Keep on travelling, good to contemplate the world. This author has built an apt word picture, good use of graphic as well. I hope you keep on writing.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
Well written. Keep on travelling, good to contemplate the world. This author has built an apt word picture, good use of graphic as well. I hope you keep on writing.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you Julie for another wonderful review and stopping by to say hello.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I enjoyed this post in which an attempt is made to replicate for the senses the exhilarating experience of speed. The five stanzas are particularly effective in breaking up the journey into different bite-size sensations of the writer's journey, while he remains unseen, revelling in his own world of sheer escapism. Many thanks for sharing and hopefully I have done your evocative post a disservice in my analysis. Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
I enjoyed this post in which an attempt is made to replicate for the senses the exhilarating experience of speed. The five stanzas are particularly effective in breaking up the journey into different bite-size sensations of the writer's journey, while he remains unseen, revelling in his own world of sheer escapism. Many thanks for sharing and hopefully I have done your evocative post a disservice in my analysis. Debbie
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you Debbie for another wonderful review and thanks again for stopping by!
Doctor Ricky
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Sorry, that should have read "hopefully I 'haven't' done your evocative post...."
Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again, a very interesting read.
Yes as if some Sickness of Sin. (comma after 'Yes')
Learn just whom am zeye? (Eye?)
Well that's because I'm traveling at the Speed of Light! (comma after 'Well')
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
Once again, a very interesting read.
Yes as if some Sickness of Sin. (comma after 'Yes')
Learn just whom am zeye? (Eye?)
Well that's because I'm traveling at the Speed of Light! (comma after 'Well')
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thanks Barbara.
Andit's actually now another day responding for I filed Fourth Degree Theft Charges yesterday.
And, it took about Two hours
Note:
If Joesph Vigil(thean I loved with)
And Dawn Deborah Reel.
Don't get Real and return my person Properly.
I'm going after 18 months in New Jersey State prison.
More on that either soon or in about a month.
Doctor Ricky