Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

This is very romantic, Gypsy. I love your new quote by Picasso. Learn the rules like a pro so you can break them like an artist. This is a wonderful way to teach us how to do as I say and not as I do. Thanks for the beautiful picture from the public domain. This highlights the poem so well.
Keep writing poetry as only you know how!
Jesse

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, Jesse, it's always good to hear from you.

Gypsy hugs

reply by Jesse James Doty on 12-Apr-2023

Thanks for the hugs, my friend.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

That was very pretty and thank you for explaining this form of poetry.Good descriptive words and metaphors. I will look to learn more about these types of poems and their history. :))

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023

I have information about the poem in my author notes, along with links where you can read more about it.

Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Heather Knight

Exceptional

Your poem is excellent as usual and the presentation is immaculate.
There isn't a word out of place. I love it.
I also like the Picasso quote.
Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023

Heather,

Thank you very much for your time and exceptional six stars review. (*<>*)

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Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was a great kanshia form, Gypsy. I loved your dual pictures of the ocean wave and the flower. Your words proved that your words were justified. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 12-Apr-2023

You are most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your kanshi poem- interesting form- good picture presentation- poem uses many metaphors to describe- midnight eyes/ dark- massive sea- body of water- size- passion ablaze burning hot in the wind- good job AP

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

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Comment from royowen

Excellent

Oh my what a brilliant way of putting it dear Gypsy, the full gambit description off a raging storm my friend, the imaginative playing out of your great scribing is fantastic beautifully done my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, Roy, it's always good to hear from you. Have a lovely day.

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reply by royowen on 11-Apr-2023

Welcome

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

There's a lot of passion and strong verbs in this poem. I can feel the sensuality as I read. Yet, it was innocent. I like it best that way. This complete package is why I've deemed you the Queen of Poetry.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Barbara, Thank you very much for the exceptional six star review and kind words. It's always good to hear from you. Have a lovely day.

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

The words are captivating the image in your poem. I must ask you again, what is the website that you get your templates from? Very impressive. Good luck, do well in the contest if you enter!

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

I don't have any templets, I do it all by myself. It's a skill I developed from years from my love of art expression in many medias.

Thank you very much, Rosemary, it's always good to hear from you. Have a lovely day.

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This sounds like a lively full on physical intimate relationship here and there are no complaints, I enjoyed the energy in these words, a fine presentation, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, Dolly it's always good to hear from you. Have a lovely day.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

this seems almost mysterious, but very cool
you should put this form in the club with a cool pic lol

good words, pictures, and colours

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)




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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

I had this form in the club a while back.

Thank you very much, Shelley, it's always good to hear from you. Have a lovely day.

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