Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This prologue is very well written. I couldn't find any way to make it better. Thank you for sharing it with us. Please let us know when it's published. Your writing is very unique.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Thanks again and Unique?
Is frustrating a slight glimmer of peek?
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Julie Lau

Excellent

Yes, your style is unique, exciting... the hallmarks of recognition and success. I know some of your story; you have my admiration for your determination and drive. Onward, soldier!

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Thanks Julie and just wait and watch?
Yes how I can steal and tare a single Tear into the Reality of this World and its Solar System.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

I think this prologue might be missing something, like words. It does present a picture and a title, so there's that. ............................................................

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Thanks Bill and the reason it's not completed?
That's because Bill your catching my work right as I'm writing it but it is completed and thanks!
Doctor Ricky 1024