Love and Loss
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Lucy In The Sky"NaPoWriMo April Poetry Contest
18 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
powerful and moving tribute to a woman and her late lost child. I loved the image, the message and the words. I like the last lines the best
She's with you every day
No need to say goodbye
Just know someday you'll play
With Lucy in the sky
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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powerful and moving tribute to a woman and her late lost child. I loved the image, the message and the words. I like the last lines the best
She's with you every day
No need to say goodbye
Just know someday you'll play
With Lucy in the sky
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Jake!
Comment from sunnilicious
The small planet found filled of diamonds. Also, a movie that I still must watch. I enjoyed reading your poem. Well thought out. Clearly written. Nice poetic tone set. I'm baffled about the last stanza. Do you view it as a heaven ? Or do you think spacecowboys would sell the minerals to jewelers ?
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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The small planet found filled of diamonds. Also, a movie that I still must watch. I enjoyed reading your poem. Well thought out. Clearly written. Nice poetic tone set. I'm baffled about the last stanza. Do you view it as a heaven ? Or do you think spacecowboys would sell the minerals to jewelers ?
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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lol hmmm
Comment from shelley kaye
lucy is a diamond in the sky ;)
beautiful poem for your best friend - i'm sure these words will help to comfort her
thank you for sharing with us
shelley ð?¦?
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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lucy is a diamond in the sky ;)
beautiful poem for your best friend - i'm sure these words will help to comfort her
thank you for sharing with us
shelley ð?¦?
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Thank you so, so much, Shelley! <3
Comment from Teri7
Jessica, This is a very beautiful poem you have penned for your best friend about the loss of her sweet baby daughter. You used loving and kind words that gives hope to the mother to look up to feel and see her Lucy. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Jessica, This is a very beautiful poem you have penned for your best friend about the loss of her sweet baby daughter. You used loving and kind words that gives hope to the mother to look up to feel and see her Lucy. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Teri<3
Comment from Jim Wile
This is a beautiful poem, Jessica. You've turned a sad subject into something both cheerful and hopeful. I loved the imagery you used ("the stars lighting your path," "the wind echoes her laugh," "a kiss of sun she'll send.")
I'm sure the loss of her child was devastating to Katy, but I'm also sure she'll find some solace in this lovely poem. Jim
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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This is a beautiful poem, Jessica. You've turned a sad subject into something both cheerful and hopeful. I loved the imagery you used ("the stars lighting your path," "the wind echoes her laugh," "a kiss of sun she'll send.")
I'm sure the loss of her child was devastating to Katy, but I'm also sure she'll find some solace in this lovely poem. Jim
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Jim. Your words mean so much to me.
<3
Jessica
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Jessica What beautiful words, and so nicely presented, lovely rhyme and meter. It did remind my of the Beatles song Lucy in the Sky with diamonds,
I am sure you friend Katy will treasure this and her Lucy will always be with her. A heartfelt lovely poem worthy of a six
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Hi Jessica What beautiful words, and so nicely presented, lovely rhyme and meter. It did remind my of the Beatles song Lucy in the Sky with diamonds,
I am sure you friend Katy will treasure this and her Lucy will always be with her. A heartfelt lovely poem worthy of a six
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review and appreciated 6 stars, Chris. Means a lot! <3
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
How very sad and heartfelt are these words about loss and grief Jessica, and I am so sorry for your friends loss and I am glad you are there to support her. Your words are touching and brings tears to my eyes, this is a tragic loss of a new born child, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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How very sad and heartfelt are these words about loss and grief Jessica, and I am so sorry for your friends loss and I am glad you are there to support her. Your words are touching and brings tears to my eyes, this is a tragic loss of a new born child, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Dolly<3
Comment from GWHARGIS
Oh my gosh, I am so sorry to read this in your author notes. I do like how you assure the grieving mom that even though physically the child isn't there, she will never be forgotten. All the mother has to do is look around her. Beautifully written. My condolences to the family. Gretchen
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Oh my gosh, I am so sorry to read this in your author notes. I do like how you assure the grieving mom that even though physically the child isn't there, she will never be forgotten. All the mother has to do is look around her. Beautifully written. My condolences to the family. Gretchen
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Gretchen!
<3
Jessica
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a heartwarming and comforting poem to a mother who has lost a daughter. I can relate. I lost a daughter, a few hours after birth, years ago. In your poem, you've included well chosen words of beauty and inspiration. Your artwork pairs perfectly. I almost expected to see traces of Lucy in the clouds.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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This is a heartwarming and comforting poem to a mother who has lost a daughter. I can relate. I lost a daughter, a few hours after birth, years ago. In your poem, you've included well chosen words of beauty and inspiration. Your artwork pairs perfectly. I almost expected to see traces of Lucy in the clouds.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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I'm humbled by your words. Thank you so much. I am so incredibly sorry to hear of your loss, I imagine no amount of time lessens the grief. My heart goes out to you! <3 <3
Jessica
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Wow, what a beautiful, heartwarming verse for your friend who grieves. I pray your endearing words will lift her face to the sunshine, and that she will find all that you say to be true. Lucy if looking down on her from above. Exquisitely crafted.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Wow, what a beautiful, heartwarming verse for your friend who grieves. I pray your endearing words will lift her face to the sunshine, and that she will find all that you say to be true. Lucy if looking down on her from above. Exquisitely crafted.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you so very much, I'm humbled by your kind worded review! Means the world.
<3
Jessica