Comment from Kerry Foley

Exceptional

You should really be an advocate for awareness lol

I love this one as well.

you say a lot in your wee little poems :)

Nicely done my friend.



---Kerry

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

Ciao Kerry,

I can?t help it, we all have our crusade.

I love wildlife and it pains me to see how men exploit these beautiful animals.

We cause much suffering , it needs to stop.

Thanks for the support but Kerry use some stars for other members too. ( wink)

reply by Kerry Foley on 17-Apr-2023

You're welcome.

Comment from Kaiku

Exceptional

what a great commentary in so few words. Nicely done. Of course this is par for the course in your writings. Quickly and accurately a story unfolds before your eyes. Good luck in the 1-6-1 prompt which I am sure this is part of.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023

There is so much animal abuse ..

sick people that enjoy hurting animals.

95% of the orangutans natural habitat ( forests in Borneo) have been replaced with palm oil plantations.

Most mothers that wander near the plantations in search of food are shot and the babies sold as pets.

All for money and profit.

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 Contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. I agree with you that animals need to be free. That first picture to the top left is a sad image.
Your text is imbalanced in the poem box. Drop the first line down one or two spaces and go to the last word and hit enter one or two times. This will expand your poem box and put space around the text. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

I?m in bed it?s 1.00 in the morning put a log in the fireplace.

I used my phone to add line above and below , hopefully it did it right

Hard to tell when using phone.

Orangutans are solitary, peaceful creatures but their forest habitat has been replaced by palm oil plantations and they are high on the endangered list.

It?s sickening.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 18-Mar-2023

You are welcome. It's balanced now. Nite, nite!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a poignant write about these animals that have been tied up and chained and can no longer be free, how very sad this is and how cruel is man, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023