Statue or A Person?
A person imitating as a statue.2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
You wrote your fun little poem in just ten words, which was impressive. Ending with the word "dude" was a bit unsettling, but nothing was wrong with it. The picture you supplied really brought the poem to life. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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You wrote your fun little poem in just ten words, which was impressive. Ending with the word "dude" was a bit unsettling, but nothing was wrong with it. The picture you supplied really brought the poem to life. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you and for the best wishes!
Comment from Meredith Heath
I like the picture chosen for the poem. I like the illusion it gives, I can't tell if it's a person or a statue!
The only critique I have is that this poem doesn't have 10 words. It only has six.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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I like the picture chosen for the poem. I like the illusion it gives, I can't tell if it's a person or a statue!
The only critique I have is that this poem doesn't have 10 words. It only has six.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you! I have made it into ten words. Is it now good enough for a five stars rating? Can you please take another look?