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A Fathers Grieving Heartache.

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My loss of my only son Jason.

5 total reviews 
Comment from Marienkiefer
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The blue rose adds special meaning to this journey.
-One single blue teardrop, one rose, one God as saviour.
-How very creative to use this colour to explore pain, sadness and loss and devotion, adding dimension to your writing.
-Nice touch to add the national helpline number for those who may need support or assistance.
Once again, a beautifully frank and poignant testimony.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
    When it comes to this situation.
    When it comes to writing dedicated poem.
    When I came to the artestry artistry when it came to the painting.
    Our art teacher had no red paint.
    I've rewritten the dedicated original entitled ,
    "Only One Single Red Rose" (which is in a book by Author House and titled,
    "Songs of Honor"
    About a dozen times and thanks Marienkiefer.
    Doctor Ricky 1024


reply by Marienkiefer on 07-Mar-2023
    You are very welcome 🌸
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Did you paint this blue rose Ricky? It is quite remarkable and it inspired you to write about someone with a broken heart, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
    Yes that's my opinion and yes that's a dedication for my wife Carolyn.
    November 23rd, 2003
    She wanted to be with our Son Jason.
    I've been alone now going on closing on Twenty years.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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The pain of losing a child can lead to someone committing suicide. I'm sorry she felt that was the only way. I can't say I enjoyed reading because of the subject matter.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
    Sometimes we do things not seemingly necessary but needed.
    Thank you.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Douglas Goff
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You are hitting some home runs this week my friend! All of these innuendo poems about the opposite sex might lead one to infer that you are quite the "ladies man".

Regardless, I enjoy your work. D

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much. Douglas and I just added my own personal artwork to this!
    Doctor Ricky
reply by Douglas Goff on 05-Mar-2023
    Well done, Sir!
Comment from prettybluebirds
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A sad tale you wrote about here, Ricky. The pain of losing her son must have overwhelmed your wife until she couldn't stand it anymore. I can understand her terrible pain and grief.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for reviewing this. Pretty blue birds and I just added my own personal artwork to it.
    Doctor Ricky