Taste of My Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "The Storm Inside Me"The Pathway to Pain and Misery
2 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Hopefully all this will be over on March 6th. I'm praying for you.
It Bleeds with need,indeed. (space needed after comma)
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Hopefully all this will be over on March 6th. I'm praying for you.
It Bleeds with need,indeed. (space needed after comma)
Cheap motels to shelders to compt Casino Hotel rooms since January 13th 2023. (shelters to compt????)
My Smile. I wear upside down! (comma after 'smile' not period)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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I went through this and added to it in an edit and made it a lot more powerful!
Thanks again, Barbara.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Dr. Nad
Good picture to depict floating emptiness. The angst with which you portray yourself is palpable throughout this work. There's a sensitive inner struggle yet it is replete with self discovery. There's also a strong vein of resolve that permeates your poem. Thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Good picture to depict floating emptiness. The angst with which you portray yourself is palpable throughout this work. There's a sensitive inner struggle yet it is replete with self discovery. There's also a strong vein of resolve that permeates your poem. Thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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So glad to be able to present this and receive positive reviews.
Thanks Dr.Nad.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Sorry to take so long to respond to your reaction to my review. Life conflicts have been keeping me off of FanStory. You are most welcome for my review of your work.
