Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Very funny.
Congratulations. By your entry
you haven't a chance to be d.q'd in this contest.
I should have entered it, for what I just writ is also a Landay, but writing short submissions does not turn me on.
Good Luck.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023

Thanks, Tom

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

You've got to win this one, Bill!!! It is so funny. I'd never heard of a Landay before, I don't think I'll try it, I'll probably be the same as you, run out of syllables!! LOL Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023

Thanks, Sandra.

Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

Hey Bill,
I have no idea what a landay is, but I like what you posted here. It was original and funny. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed day.
Tom

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023

Thanks, Tom. It is the form here: Nine syllable first line and thirteen syllable second line.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

Hahahaa. This is an entertaining piece of poetry dear Bill! I love the point you make as if poetry and meters are not difficult enough.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck in the contest!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023

Thanks, Rebekka. New formats because there are not enough yet.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Lol. It happens. Witty and sarcastic. I like it - and I do love the image of the bridge, or the half bridge. Maybe they ran out of building mat ....
Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023

Thanks, Wendy

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Bill
Seems like you dropped the 'ball' not like you lol
A good attempt at this style It made me smile so good luck in this contest
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023

Thanks, Chris

Comment from SimianSavant

Exceptional

To dominate this Landay contest
Bill put a bullet in his gun and played Russian roul--

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023

Thanks, Harambe, for the neat review in kind and the heavy stars.

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Bill,
I'm still snickering at the second line, truncated as it may be...

Excellent entry to the contest. To me very imaginative!

Syllables ad sarcasm requirements met.

John

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023

Thank you, John

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

I never heard of this landay form but it seems to be one that is well suited for your humor and creativity.
You had fun with the syllable requirement and gave me a smile to boot.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023

Thanks, Mary

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

LOL, well, at least you knew how to write one! That is a whole lot more than me. I think you deserve a lot of credit for your creativity. Good luck in the contest. Terry.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023

Thanks, Terry