What's that Smell?
a 1-6-12 total reviews
Comment from Tommy Francesco
This poem lacks depth, substance, and any real artistic merit. The use of crude language does not automatically make a poem engaging or meaningful, and in this case, it falls flat.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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This poem lacks depth, substance, and any real artistic merit. The use of crude language does not automatically make a poem engaging or meaningful, and in this case, it falls flat.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Depth? Eight syllables, Tommy. All three lines must rhyme. Format is fixed. Read the requirements of the poem before you review,
Comment from JT traveller
A humorous tale. And it does not only happen to children. Haha. I can relate as a traveller to foreign countries with different hygiene standards. The words, " a little bit of self- loathing" come to mind.
Great layout. Love a laugh to start the day.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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A humorous tale. And it does not only happen to children. Haha. I can relate as a traveller to foreign countries with different hygiene standards. The words, " a little bit of self- loathing" come to mind.
Great layout. Love a laugh to start the day.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Jacqueline.