Goddess of Love
Relax my friends I found there is more than one.2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here as jealousy can turn to revenge until a new interest comes your way. You managed to use all the required words for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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You made me smile here as jealousy can turn to revenge until a new interest comes your way. You managed to use all the required words for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Dolly, for your time and your review. Appreciated.
Comment from Yin Cheah
How cleverly you incorporated the words into this sad yet rather funny story! As you said, there's more than one around! Your rhyme scheme works in most cases; it didn't sound force. The story is succinct and I think reflected the brevity of the romance. Nice job!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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How cleverly you incorporated the words into this sad yet rather funny story! As you said, there's more than one around! Your rhyme scheme works in most cases; it didn't sound force. The story is succinct and I think reflected the brevity of the romance. Nice job!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Appreciated.