Debi The Aspired
This is a free verse poem.7 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good tribute free verse about Debi. She welcomes most with open arms and heart to the FS site. The text is an okay size, but it could be one or two sizes larger for senior eyes. The message is a clearly stated tribute to Debi. I do think you captured a lot of her essence.
I would drop the first line down to have better spacing in the poem box. I think thoughts need an s} thought mystical.
The visual fits well. I believe Debi will be touched by this poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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This is a good tribute free verse about Debi. She welcomes most with open arms and heart to the FS site. The text is an okay size, but it could be one or two sizes larger for senior eyes. The message is a clearly stated tribute to Debi. I do think you captured a lot of her essence.
I would drop the first line down to have better spacing in the poem box. I think thoughts need an s} thought mystical.
The visual fits well. I believe Debi will be touched by this poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much,
Sandra. It's very kind of you
to take the time to read &
review my poem. I added an
S to the word, "thought."
I don't have a computer, I
work from my cellphone,
and it can get wonky, lol!
I will be visiting your page
hopefully tomorrow. Many
blessings to you. ~.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did an awesome job with your heartfelt poem, Mystery Author.
Your words were descriptive and well-chosen. The flow was smooth.
I liked the way you described poets as Heaven sent. Of course, God
knew and did that for us. You were right in everything you wrote
about Debi.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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You did an awesome job with your heartfelt poem, Mystery Author.
Your words were descriptive and well-chosen. The flow was smooth.
I liked the way you described poets as Heaven sent. Of course, God
knew and did that for us. You were right in everything you wrote
about Debi.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 26-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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My deepest thanks, Jan.
Debi is such a kind and
welcoming person. She's
so positive. I feel God loves
His poets. Many blessings
to you. ~
Comment from JLR
A pleasant Free Verse for a most pleasant soul. Your words flow with ease and it is a laudable Free Verse that certainly should do well in the contest. Thank you for sharing your talent in this manner.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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A pleasant Free Verse for a most pleasant soul. Your words flow with ease and it is a laudable Free Verse that certainly should do well in the contest. Thank you for sharing your talent in this manner.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much, JLR.
Debi is such an inspirational
presence on Fanstory. Many
blessings to you.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written poem about a wonderful lady and friend, Debi, on here. You used very good descriptive words about her that are so true. Thank you for sharing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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This is a very beautiful and very well written poem about a wonderful lady and friend, Debi, on here. You used very good descriptive words about her that are so true. Thank you for sharing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Teri. She is an
inspiration to us other poets.
I hope you have a lovely
weekend. Blessings to you ~
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
I have no clue who this is, but your beautiful words have touched me to tears.
Your heart has given my heart such a gift and I am so very humbled by your thoughtfulness. I will most certainly have the most peaceful sleep after reading your gracious and lovely poem. I feel so blessed that I have you as a friend.
God Bless you and thank you for the biggest smile and warmth I feel from your kindness!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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I have no clue who this is, but your beautiful words have touched me to tears.
Your heart has given my heart such a gift and I am so very humbled by your thoughtfulness. I will most certainly have the most peaceful sleep after reading your gracious and lovely poem. I feel so blessed that I have you as a friend.
God Bless you and thank you for the biggest smile and warmth I feel from your kindness!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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You are so welcome, dear
Debi. You are so positive and friendly, and you radiate so
much sunshine on FS. I hope
your weekend is fab and very
creative. Many blessings to
you and your family!
Comment from karenina
I am certain Debi will be beaming with delight at this tribute poem! Nice free verse, and so nice of you to acknowledge someone who welcomed you to the fold and has been a huge part of your enjoyment of the site!
Debi is always writing kind and caring poems for others (myself included)--yet insists she doesn't want the limelight.
Good for you! She deserves to take a bow!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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I am certain Debi will be beaming with delight at this tribute poem! Nice free verse, and so nice of you to acknowledge someone who welcomed you to the fold and has been a huge part of your enjoyment of the site!
Debi is always writing kind and caring poems for others (myself included)--yet insists she doesn't want the limelight.
Good for you! She deserves to take a bow!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much,
dear karenina. You are also
such a kind and benevolent
presence on FS. Many of
God's blessings to you. ~
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine tribute to Debi and she will be most pleased with your kind words here in your free write, I enjoyed your well chosen words and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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A fine tribute to Debi and she will be most pleased with your kind words here in your free write, I enjoyed your well chosen words and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much
dear Dolly. You are also a
friendly and positive presence here on FS. Thank
you for the 5 stars. Many
weekend blessings to you.