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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You finally found someone who cared. Your story should be placed in a published book one day. You lived a very weary life; so sorry that you had to be an orphan and had some uncontrollable people around you.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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You finally found someone who cared. Your story should be placed in a published book one day. You lived a very weary life; so sorry that you had to be an orphan and had some uncontrollable people around you.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Uncontrollable one descriptive word for them. Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Brett,
This was an interesting chapter, but I was a little confused because I don't know where you are during this period of time between the time you ate at Mc D's and Dusty is in the bar. Surely you didn't go back to the hall? I'm looking forward to reading more. Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Hello Brett,
This was an interesting chapter, but I was a little confused because I don't know where you are during this period of time between the time you ate at Mc D's and Dusty is in the bar. Surely you didn't go back to the hall? I'm looking forward to reading more. Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 17-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
We never know for sure what makes anyone do anything, but I'm sure Dusty put plenty of thought into such a life changing decision. Besides, it wasn't only his life he would be changing. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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We never know for sure what makes anyone do anything, but I'm sure Dusty put plenty of thought into such a life changing decision. Besides, it wasn't only his life he would be changing. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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As always so appreciate your support, your comments, the sixer, and the review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Another excellent chapter to read. I see the turn around in your world beginning to happen. I can imagine how bad your life was by your words. I really can't comprehend to any depth because I have never been in that situation. Have a great day. Shirley
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Another excellent chapter to read. I see the turn around in your world beginning to happen. I can imagine how bad your life was by your words. I really can't comprehend to any depth because I have never been in that situation. Have a great day. Shirley
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Wendy G
Good to read about Dusty and see what sort of person he was. Seems rough and tough, but with a heart of gold - and sounds like he's perhaps been a bit burnt by life as well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Good to read about Dusty and see what sort of person he was. Seems rough and tough, but with a heart of gold - and sounds like he's perhaps been a bit burnt by life as well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
So, you made an impression on Dusty and he can't get you off his mind. I think that is wonderful. More people should do that. Children need a family to grow up with good moral values. I find your story to be very interesting Brett. Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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So, you made an impression on Dusty and he can't get you off his mind. I think that is wonderful. More people should do that. Children need a family to grow up with good moral values. I find your story to be very interesting Brett. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a huge move in his life, but one he hopefully will never regret. You are Brett, not Dusty, right? I would think you couldn't believe what was coming after you when Dusty wanted to keep you. I look forward to seeing more of your story.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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This is a huge move in his life, but one he hopefully will never regret. You are Brett, not Dusty, right? I would think you couldn't believe what was coming after you when Dusty wanted to keep you. I look forward to seeing more of your story.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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At that point did not know Dusty was coming after me. Was I shocked when he did? Stay tuned. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Ricky1024
This this additional added chapter was interesting and well written.
It brings more color into your unwanted dog book.
Thanks for sharing this and a Sixer in your Face?
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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This this additional added chapter was interesting and well written.
It brings more color into your unwanted dog book.
Thanks for sharing this and a Sixer in your Face?
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Much appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Sankey
This was an excellent background to how you and Dusty met. This a lovely, caring post. Keep them coming, Bro. This is my favourite kind of writing. I need to get back on the writing trail myself, soon. No spags.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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This was an excellent background to how you and Dusty met. This a lovely, caring post. Keep them coming, Bro. This is my favourite kind of writing. I need to get back on the writing trail myself, soon. No spags.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Much appreciate your support, as always. Plenty more of this story to come.
Comment from country ranch writer
It is good he believes Bret for he needs someone to care about him desperately right now. If anyone can help him he can. Let's hope he can turbo behind bars!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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It is good he believes Bret for he needs someone to care about him desperately right now. If anyone can help him he can. Let's hope he can turbo behind bars!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.