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Comment from kahpot
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This free verse is so moving, so many feelings going through this girls mind, yet knowing she is still or now all alone, an excellent read, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
Comment from country ranch writer
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Sometimes we don't see what's coming till it's to late and all we had is the words, I wish I would a ,could a had figured it out what was going on between us before it was to late but now it leaves us with what if...
Saturday1/14/2023.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much for the excellent five stars review, you are very kind.

    gypsy
reply by country ranch writer on 14-Jan-2023
    Hugssmiles
reply by country ranch writer on 14-Jan-2023
    Hugs smiles🦌🦌🦌🦌
Comment from Kaiku
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Well Gypsy, the picture of this young woman has me a bit on edge. She is crying deeply inside uncertain of her next actions. I don`t want to be her right now. Nice work as usual.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much for your time , kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
reply by Kaiku on 13-Jan-2023
    yep
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Gypsy-----and it's so true that we're all slaves to the what-ifs in our minds. Sometimes I drive myself insane going over and over my words and deeds of the past, like if I'd only done this, or said that, things might have been different. I know they can't be changed, but does that stop me from thinking about it?

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much for your time , kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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I have to say that this free verse shines as a further example of the depth of your poetry talent.
A melancholy poem of loss and disappointment.
Beautiful and haunting.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
    Mary,

    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Your poem is so well written. Really like the words and their meaning. What a heartful way to express what you feel when you lose someone; and their number so you can't keep in touch!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
    Rosemary,

    Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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The simple artwork you chose for this beautiful poem is perfect. It makes me wonder which came first. The poem is emotional of a lost love. I think at one time in our lives we have all been there. You expressed it perfectly.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
    Barbara,

    The poem came first. I Google the kind of picture I want and sometimes is a perfect match.

    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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What a wonderful free verse, Gypsy. Your words capture the dispare of the situation, the picture choice was so serene and beautiful. Blessed Be n Hugs!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
    Aryr,

    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your free verse poem - good picture presentation - girl looks like she is having a bad time of it. verse flows nicely- story of a young girl struggling to let go of her past attachment and move on. Seems that she has decided that it is a losing game and is ready. The only thing to suggest is to use the the word 'slave' vs slaved, slave to the whims, smoother form of the same word. Good Job. AP

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
    AP,

    Thank you for your help with grammar. Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
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An excellent free verse with span articulate language rich narrative, and on a very hot topic in poetry, the strong poetic terminology give the great poem a forward thrust, a good poem Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
    Roy,

    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by royowen on 13-Jan-2023
    Well done