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If You Knew How I Hate Two

There is so much to write and say, just 2 today?

5 total reviews 
Comment from Sarah Tummey
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

A brilliant play on "Stand" and "Stanza". I loved it, and you got your message across without the need for five of them! Thanks for making me smile.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
    Nothing I have done since I can remember has been labeled "brilliant'.
    Thank you! I was simply in a mood to have some fun and that prompt opened the door. Glad you enjoyed it! Happy New Year.
Comment from patricia dillon
Excellent
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Well, you expressed yourself sufficiently in these two stanzas. I sympathise. It is sometimes harder to be brief than it is to be long-winded. I wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
    As a Texan, our general rule of communication is, "Why use one word when twelve willl do?" 2 stanzas does not even give me room to get started. Thanks for stopping by. Hope to meet you in a longer poem...
reply by patricia dillon on 11-Jan-2023
    I look forward to it!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Excellent
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Gibberish it might be but to this reader it pleased me well, and thus you gained one more star than others rated have so far. WEll done. ..........................................

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
    Many thanks for your great review:
    your 5 stars and your "Well Done", too
    Yet I must ask about your "one more star"
    The other two had 5s too, same as you are?
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
    Many thanks for your great review:
    your 5 stars and your "Well Done", too
    Yet I must ask about your "one more star"
    The other two had 5s too, same as you are?
reply by Tom Horonzy on 10-Jan-2023
    I sit confused. Did I mean to give a six? Seems so by your comment. If it didn't go through, I cannot express my disappointment, if in fact that was intended, but since its water over the dam, I don't know of a way to rectify. You didn't get fours, did you?
Comment from Carol Clark2
Excellent
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I love the humor of your poem, and the way you played on the word stanza. Not only are you limited to two stanzas, but also to two posts for the day on FS. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
    These have not been my only indications that life can be unfair. But, with poetry and nice notes from pretty gals, I mush on. Thanks!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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This is hilarious and inventive and a fine poem for the contest. Your clever words made me smile and these two stanzas certainly stood out, much enjoyed and good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
    I'm almost 75 but, of course). Glad you liked it! Happy New Year
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
    How embarrassing, to mess up my reply to one of our very best poets on her nice review. I am sure that there was something clever earlier in my reply which I accidentally omitted. I would replace it, but I am just not that clever this time of the morning. Great to hear from you.