Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Fear not ..."Musing of an old man
30 total reviews
Comment from Kaiku
Very cool. It states a 15 syllable count. Was it also a requirement to write in the manner you did or was that just to help us count to 15? Might be a dumb question.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Very cool. It states a 15 syllable count. Was it also a requirement to write in the manner you did or was that just to help us count to 15? Might be a dumb question.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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I simply wrote and presented in this format the required 15 syllable words.
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Yep
Comment from Sally Law
A wonderful, faith building poem, dear J! I really needed this today. Thank you! Beautifully penned and illustrated as always. Sending you my best today and very best for the upcoming contest.
Sal :))
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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A wonderful, faith building poem, dear J! I really needed this today. Thank you! Beautifully penned and illustrated as always. Sending you my best today and very best for the upcoming contest.
Sal :))
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Smiling bavk, my friend, Have a gloroius day!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great entry for the contest. Your words are so true. When we have a personal relationship with the Lord Jesus Christ, we have nothing to fear, He gives us peace in every situation.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Great entry for the contest. Your words are so true. When we have a personal relationship with the Lord Jesus Christ, we have nothing to fear, He gives us peace in every situation.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thanks Anne,
Comment from Ric Myworld
Great poem and picture combination. Since I don't know anything about poetry, I read very little. But whenever I'm about to post something outside my comfort zone, I turn to poetry for inspiration. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Great poem and picture combination. Since I don't know anything about poetry, I read very little. But whenever I'm about to post something outside my comfort zone, I turn to poetry for inspiration. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Ric, that is how it all started for me.
Comment from June Sargent
Wise words to live by in this age of fear and uncertainty. As we enter the new year, we need to trust that our Grand Creator has our back. We need not feel alone in our daily struggles.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Wise words to live by in this age of fear and uncertainty. As we enter the new year, we need to trust that our Grand Creator has our back. We need not feel alone in our daily struggles.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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June thanks, Reading your work, I know you know! 👍👍🙏🙏
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A very positive message in your fifteen syllable poem JLR. Fear not - caught my attention straight away in this read. A lovely presentation and good luck in the contest. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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A very positive message in your fifteen syllable poem JLR. Fear not - caught my attention straight away in this read. A lovely presentation and good luck in the contest. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Valda, thank you! 🙏
Comment from Boogienights
This is a wonderful contest entry and a testament to your deep faith. I would like to do just as you say in your poem, but I have trouble getting there. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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This is a wonderful contest entry and a testament to your deep faith. I would like to do just as you say in your poem, but I have trouble getting there. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Boggienights, I am sending my prayers for the highest and best of all things to bring Peace into every breath of your life and under all circumstances you are fearless in your knowing you are a child of God.
Comment from JT traveller
Fifteen syllables, perfect. Good choice of the capital lettering at the finale to emphasise your point. Overall, a good composition. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Fifteen syllables, perfect. Good choice of the capital lettering at the finale to emphasise your point. Overall, a good composition. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Thank you Jacqueline!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This contest entry is to the point. That is a very good thing. There is no mistake about what is says or what it means. Yes, we all God's children and He loves us. Good luck with this contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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This contest entry is to the point. That is a very good thing. There is no mistake about what is says or what it means. Yes, we all God's children and He loves us. Good luck with this contest.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Hi Barbara, thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen-syllable poem, Fear Not, has the proper formatting and reminds those who know that we are children of the powerful God of the Universe. .............................
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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This fifteen-syllable poem, Fear Not, has the proper formatting and reminds those who know that we are children of the powerful God of the Universe. .............................
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Thumbs up!