A Fathers Grieving Heartache.
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Listen to My Pain?"My loss of my only son Jason.
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written post you have penned. That is so sad about your son and your wife. That had to be so hard to handle. You are in my prayers! Teri
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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This is a very interesting and well written post you have penned. That is so sad about your son and your wife. That had to be so hard to handle. You are in my prayers! Teri
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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It is very true, as it is very sad, and it has been very bad.
Yes, but almost now two decades ago.
Ago to heal.
As the time can be.
Yes, be most sweeter,
Sweeter sometimes and the sweetest?
Sweetest of wine?
Doctor Ricky thanks tou Teri7 for your review.
Comment from Sarah Lefort
I will always be impressed by how we as humans can create so much beauty out of pain. My writing is better when it comes from pain. I read somewhere something like this : "When in grief you can't help but spill a bit of yourself onto the world, maybe that's what grief intended. The world needed more of your expression." I see your strength in your writing. Many blessings to you Ricky.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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I will always be impressed by how we as humans can create so much beauty out of pain. My writing is better when it comes from pain. I read somewhere something like this : "When in grief you can't help but spill a bit of yourself onto the world, maybe that's what grief intended. The world needed more of your expression." I see your strength in your writing. Many blessings to you Ricky.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you very kindly Sarah for your comments review and stopping by and have a blessed week.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from R. Marc Goodson
Interesting writing here! The action moves along well and keeps the reader engaged, I do have a few mechanical suggestions:
'A Long time ago unfortunately Eye went *Insane.
*Insane* Adjective' (There's a very large space between these two statements. Was it intentional? If so, no need to change it.
'go insane:idiom' Needs a space between the colon and the word idiom.
'After two periods of severe and psychotic episode of depression.' If it's two periodsthen episode needs to be plural, episodes.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Interesting writing here! The action moves along well and keeps the reader engaged, I do have a few mechanical suggestions:
'A Long time ago unfortunately Eye went *Insane.
*Insane* Adjective' (There's a very large space between these two statements. Was it intentional? If so, no need to change it.
'go insane:idiom' Needs a space between the colon and the word idiom.
'After two periods of severe and psychotic episode of depression.' If it's two periodsthen episode needs to be plural, episodes.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thanks R. Mark Goodson.
Didn't get a chance to edit this one.
Hard to do traveling on a bus!
Doctor Ricky1024