haiku (with colorful fans)
A haiku for the contest5 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
Thanks for sharing the background for the ginkgo tree. I was totally unaware of its longevity.
Your concluding line on your Haiku places every thought in a nice package.
Best wishes in the upcoming voting.
Mark
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
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June,
Thanks for sharing the background for the ginkgo tree. I was totally unaware of its longevity.
Your concluding line on your Haiku places every thought in a nice package.
Best wishes in the upcoming voting.
Mark
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Mark. Glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Teri7
June, This is a very well written haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and beautiful imagery with the art work you chose. I love those fans. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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June, This is a very well written haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and beautiful imagery with the art work you chose. I love those fans. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you! I?m glad you enjoyed the imagery of the dancing ginkgo leaves!
Comment from BethShelby
I had no idea a ginkgo tree was so beautiful. I love the way you have worded your poem. The leaves do look like the fans of the geisha. The last line "elegance in strenth" is a lovely way of putting it.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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I had no idea a ginkgo tree was so beautiful. I love the way you have worded your poem. The leaves do look like the fans of the geisha. The last line "elegance in strenth" is a lovely way of putting it.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you! I?m glad you enjoyed the imagery of the dancing ginkgo leaves!
Comment from royowen
It certainly looks like a marvellous plant, beauty is always a magnet for the soul, I can't believe that man can possibly be happy in the lap of ugliness, this is a great haiku June, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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It certainly looks like a marvellous plant, beauty is always a magnet for the soul, I can't believe that man can possibly be happy in the lap of ugliness, this is a great haiku June, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you! I?m glad you enjoyed the imagery of the dancing ginkgo leaves!
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Well done
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, With Colorful Fans, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, creates the eye-catching movement of the ginkgo leaves which, noting the image used here, would relay a sense of power in the beauty.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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This haiku, With Colorful Fans, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, creates the eye-catching movement of the ginkgo leaves which, noting the image used here, would relay a sense of power in the beauty.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you! I?m glad you enjoyed the imagery of the dancing ginkgo leaves!