Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But I always enjoy reading what others have to say, and hope that I can decipher their poems as they've intended them to be understood. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022

Thanks Ric for commenting and stoping by.
Have a most Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Douglas Goff

Exceptional

Dang it Ricky I can't read your stuff without throwing out a six. It's all so very good.

This part has an issue:
Broken *Heart"

Other than that better than great!

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022

Much appreciated on this one Douglas.
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

So very sorry for your loss. I would agree that losing a child would be something you might never recover from. The double meaning in certain lines made me pause and consider your grief on a different level. Great job. Gretchen

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022

Thanks again Gretchen from going through the screams and into my aimless and wandering Heart.
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

Mourning has no time-frame. Until it is done you are condemned to live the pain of parting over and over again. People who don't know better say the pain fades with time. Unfortunately they lie. I will think of you. Kate xx

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022

Thanks Katherine for your comments and review and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky