The Contest
Donald Duck v . Yankee Doodle2 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
"The Contest"
This is a Tricky Rhyme Time Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no grammar issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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"The Contest"
This is a Tricky Rhyme Time Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no grammar issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you, sir, for your careful read. Appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Bill Schott
After reading this poem, one is left with the image of an Uncle Sam figure, and a duck in cracker jacks, projectile vomiting pizza puke all over the place. Then there's those orange and pickle pieces too.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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After reading this poem, one is left with the image of an Uncle Sam figure, and a duck in cracker jacks, projectile vomiting pizza puke all over the place. Then there's those orange and pickle pieces too.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thanks for the feedback. Oranges and pickles would only be included on a California pizza.