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Glossophobia, the Villain

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Glossophobia, the fear of public speaking

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Comment from Ric Myworld
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The old saying "Whether you think you can or can't you're right" is very true in many cases. I've often wondered what I truly am or was meant to be. Now, with your help, I've figured out I'm probably a little scrub bass flopping on the trail. LOL. Thanks for sharing and the fine analogies.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
    You are funny; I think you are pulling my leg. I think there is more to you than a scrub bass flopping on the trail. Keep writing soon to be a best seller author.
Comment from royowen
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I can remember studying something called psycho cybernetics, which has its root in Greek, meaning "the steersman" were one imagines they are successful in whatever their dream and adventure is. Beautifully written Maria, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
    Thank you Roy for taking time to review my work.
reply by royowen on 04-Oct-2022
    Most welcome Maria,
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
    I will look into it. Was it by Jose Silva?
reply by royowen on 07-Oct-2022
    I don?t know dear girl
Comment from Rachel Clark
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I wish I knew what the disorder is that you're referring too. I still really enjoyed the flow of this piece and followed it easily. I personally am different spiritually, but I like hearing the interpretation of your views of these scriptures. Nice job

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    Thank you, it's all covered in chapter one.
Comment from Tara Maxfield
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I loved the poem inclusion at the end and thought it really was a nice addition. You did a really good job building up to the assumptions made as well. Overall, a nice piece.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    Thank you for your review.