Just a few of my favorite things
It's the small things that matters in life2 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
This is a good. Jus two suggestions to help the rhyme scheme stay consistent. Good luck in the contest.
notes:
What does life mean to me?
{Let me count the ways.}
-What does life mean to me?
Okay, I'll let you see.
Fuzzy socks on my feet,
Just a few of my favorite things.
-I love fuzzy socks on my feet.
Things you'll see when we meet.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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This is a good. Jus two suggestions to help the rhyme scheme stay consistent. Good luck in the contest.
notes:
What does life mean to me?
{Let me count the ways.}
-What does life mean to me?
Okay, I'll let you see.
Fuzzy socks on my feet,
Just a few of my favorite things.
-I love fuzzy socks on my feet.
Things you'll see when we meet.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you for the suggestions and comments. I am spinning off Browning's Sonnet 43. How do I love thee? Let me count the ways...
Comment from Teri7
I wish I had six stars to give you for this great poem about your meaning of life. You used very good, heartfelt words and the socks are great! I love those kind too. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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I wish I had six stars to give you for this great poem about your meaning of life. You used very good, heartfelt words and the socks are great! I love those kind too. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and for taking the time to review my work. I really appreciated it.
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You are so welcome! Blessings, Teri