Earth Flow
when the seas are one3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Lober,
This poem has strong emotions and images in a few words. It shows how sharing with each other makes the world a better and more peaceful place.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Joan
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Lober,
This poem has strong emotions and images in a few words. It shows how sharing with each other makes the world a better and more peaceful place.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your 3-6-9 poem about the possibility of the future of earth. I love your last line about mountain peaks. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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I enjoyed your 3-6-9 poem about the possibility of the future of earth. I love your last line about mountain peaks. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Hi my friend,
glad you enjoyed this poem .
I had fun working on it.
- Jer
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Beautiful poem Jer. I love the end where you say that mountain peaks will kiss each gentle wave. There is a great flow to this poem. The picture is perfect for the post. This is a great effort, Jer.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Beautiful poem Jer. I love the end where you say that mountain peaks will kiss each gentle wave. There is a great flow to this poem. The picture is perfect for the post. This is a great effort, Jer.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Hello My Friend,
I believe that demons and muses once born, live on and on, and come to life in the works of other living writers. Let?s hope your muse helped me with this one, and urged you to grant me some golden stars. Stay safe and well.
- Jer