"Poetry from the Broken Heart"
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Comment from country ranch writer
Life is complex and not understood of the good a donirs card can do by giving life to others so they can live.Choices we have to make on the spur of the moment is heart rendering. Breaks our heart in two to let go but we must sacrifice for the better good,
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Life is complex and not understood of the good a donirs card can do by giving life to others so they can live.Choices we have to make on the spur of the moment is heart rendering. Breaks our heart in two to let go but we must sacrifice for the better good,
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Words so True.
Most people don't have to ever think about this and don't realize the importance.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Welcome
Comment from country ranch writer
Life is complex and not understood of the good a donirs card can do by giving life to others so they can live.Choices we have to make on the spur of the moment is heart rendering. Breaks our heart in two to let go but we must sacrifice for the better good,
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Life is complex and not understood of the good a donirs card can do by giving life to others so they can live.Choices we have to make on the spur of the moment is heart rendering. Breaks our heart in two to let go but we must sacrifice for the better good,
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Thanks for your review and kind comments.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment from Douglas Goff
I have no contextual issue here. It is a good read and accomplishes the task of eliciting sadness. I would go with a larger font with color that flows with your background color. Maybe a dark blue or violet would catch the eye. Nice work!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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I have no contextual issue here. It is a good read and accomplishes the task of eliciting sadness. I would go with a larger font with color that flows with your background color. Maybe a dark blue or violet would catch the eye. Nice work!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Thanks so very much Douglas for your review and kind remarks and suggestions.
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Comment from Fleedleflump
That red ink is so vibrant, fed by pain but infused with the essence of life. It's the stuff of poems and creators the world over and all through time, feeding imagination and expression. Beautifully written.
Mike
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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That red ink is so vibrant, fed by pain but infused with the essence of life. It's the stuff of poems and creators the world over and all through time, feeding imagination and expression. Beautifully written.
Mike
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Thank you Michael I just went over to somebody suggested a change in the color of the font so I edited it made it a little better.
Doctor Ricky