Jasmine Leaves?
A Short Poem.2 total reviews
Comment from Bien Kponton
Un homme apprécié depuis des millénaires est un homme grâcié doc l'odeur de son culture est toujours agréable comme celle d'une fleur et une fleur avec une bonne odeur est toujours à un endroit propre .
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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Un homme apprécié depuis des millénaires est un homme grâcié doc l'odeur de son culture est toujours agréable comme celle d'une fleur et une fleur avec une bonne odeur est toujours à un endroit propre .
Comment Written 24-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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Thanks Bien for your interesting review.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was beautiful. I realize that this was an ode to a flower but it seemed to blur into a memory of a lost love. I liked that I has to do a cerebral double take, if you will. Your wording actually had me imagining that I could smell it's exotic scent. So no errors and it flowed nicely. Very evocative and persuasive in its vibe. I thoroughly enjoyed.
Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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This was beautiful. I realize that this was an ode to a flower but it seemed to blur into a memory of a lost love. I liked that I has to do a cerebral double take, if you will. Your wording actually had me imagining that I could smell it's exotic scent. So no errors and it flowed nicely. Very evocative and persuasive in its vibe. I thoroughly enjoyed.
Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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When I was writing this I was actually thinking of a friend named Jasmine to the grown woman now.
And she was always very special to me and very pretty!
Thanks for sharing your review and have a blessed week.
Doctor Ricky 1024