It hurts to be dead
Where are the humans3 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
The never-ending hunt for more brains. You have met all requirements of the 5-7-5 and did it in a well-known manner; zombies hunting for humans to bite.
Good job.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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The never-ending hunt for more brains. You have met all requirements of the 5-7-5 and did it in a well-known manner; zombies hunting for humans to bite.
Good job.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet!
You have your first vote!
The title , which is also your opening line says much.
Becoming a living dead would be horrible, a curse.
Seeing oneself decomposed and being slave to an unnatural urge to eat human flesh.
Just the thought gives me chills and makes my stomach cringe.
I don't understand how this genre is so popular, I can't watch it ... i find it repulsive.
PS: I need to find human flesh ,,, could have been an alternative middle line
THE humans at the end sounds odd to the ear but I understand why you put THE
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Ciao poet!
You have your first vote!
The title , which is also your opening line says much.
Becoming a living dead would be horrible, a curse.
Seeing oneself decomposed and being slave to an unnatural urge to eat human flesh.
Just the thought gives me chills and makes my stomach cringe.
I don't understand how this genre is so popular, I can't watch it ... i find it repulsive.
PS: I need to find human flesh ,,, could have been an alternative middle line
THE humans at the end sounds odd to the ear but I understand why you put THE
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thanks!
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I have not heard from you for a few days. Hoping you are good.
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A couple of questions, what chores do you do, where do you live? I miss your reviews.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I like your title and opening line - it's quite a funny thought, that being dead could be painful. Only the sweet nourishment of hooman brain will slake my pain!
Moke
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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I like your title and opening line - it's quite a funny thought, that being dead could be painful. Only the sweet nourishment of hooman brain will slake my pain!
Moke
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Mike? Lol
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Indeed - it's amazing how often I type Moke when I'm on the phone, and a little bit annoying it doesn't fix it, given how eager it is to 'fix' other things that are actually fine!
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Have you read all my contest entries?
