Eclipse
What lies within?8 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Zombies are one of my favorite horror genres. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Good entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Zombies are one of my favorite horror genres. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest,
Gypsy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I think I have met a cople of these zombies who walk among us. They should be dead, they may not know it yet, but they should be.
Cute little verse on a questionable topic.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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I think I have met a cople of these zombies who walk among us. They should be dead, they may not know it yet, but they should be.
Cute little verse on a questionable topic.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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They are all around.lol. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This zombie 5-7-5, Eclipse, has the right setup and reminds us that, c'mon, zombies SHOULD be dead. But look! They are just walking around eating brains like it's cool.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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This zombie 5-7-5, Eclipse, has the right setup and reminds us that, c'mon, zombies SHOULD be dead. But look! They are just walking around eating brains like it's cool.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
That is a great picture for zombies. I almost used it for one of my poems. This reminds me of the the television show, 'Twillight Zone.'
There are many people who walk around like zombies. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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That is a great picture for zombies. I almost used it for one of my poems. This reminds me of the the television show, 'Twillight Zone.'
There are many people who walk around like zombies. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Your review means a great deal.
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You are welcome.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, "True Blood " was a wonderful vampire tale to watch, and yes, Zombies do decide who lives and dies, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Excellent, "True Blood " was a wonderful vampire tale to watch, and yes, Zombies do decide who lives and dies, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments.
Comment from Wendy G
Is your last line a question? If so it is thought-provoking. The sense of creepiness and not knowing who the "zombies" are pervades throughout. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Is your last line a question? If so it is thought-provoking. The sense of creepiness and not knowing who the "zombies" are pervades throughout. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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It is a question, and thank you for your insightful review.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
It's a good entry to the 5-7-5 Zombie contest. The syllable count is accurate. The visual fits okay. It doesn't make me think of zombies. The text needs to be larger, so it is easy to read. It also would be more prominent. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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It's a good entry to the 5-7-5 Zombie contest. The syllable count is accurate. The visual fits okay. It doesn't make me think of zombies. The text needs to be larger, so it is easy to read. It also would be more prominent. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Your comments are appreciated.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Fleedleflump
This was a fun prompt - it's nice to see a subversion of the usual. Most celebrities over thirty look a bit like zombies these days and we're living longer than we probably should. Of course, politicians and bankers are also dead inside!
Mike
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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This was a fun prompt - it's nice to see a subversion of the usual. Most celebrities over thirty look a bit like zombies these days and we're living longer than we probably should. Of course, politicians and bankers are also dead inside!
Mike
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Hey, thank you for getting my point about those that are dead inside.
