Sandpaper People
Rub you the wrong way29 total reviews
Comment from LovnPeace
I love this poem. Tongue in cheek, but a true longing. All of this is why I have been a virtual hermit much of my life. Love peace and solitude. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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I love this poem. Tongue in cheek, but a true longing. All of this is why I have been a virtual hermit much of my life. Love peace and solitude. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you Barbara. Just my little rant. I try not to let people get to me, but every once in a while, they just do. (smile)
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Sugarray77
This is so well written and fun to read. So many of us encounter sandpaper people so we easily relate to the frustration and angst that comes with dealing with them. So well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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This is so well written and fun to read. So many of us encounter sandpaper people so we easily relate to the frustration and angst that comes with dealing with them. So well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you Melissa. It was fun to write.
I love reading your work.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yup you are right the sound of the sandpaper will make anyone nuts. So your rant is legit. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Yup you are right the sound of the sandpaper will make anyone nuts. So your rant is legit. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your encouraging review.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Oh yes, I know many sandpaper people. I tolerate them but they do go "against my grain." Good name for a certain type of individual.
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Nice story, I think I would feel better too, after getting that off my chest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Oh yes, I know many sandpaper people. I tolerate them but they do go "against my grain." Good name for a certain type of individual.
Para 1: CONSIDER removing extra spaces after (show.) and (tree) to make the paragraph more cohesive.
Nice story, I think I would feel better too, after getting that off my chest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
Comment from Quoiky
Very well written work. It did have the Anapestic tetrameter rhythm and I found myself almost humming.
The sandpaper-ish people are everywhere. God help us.
I'm glad you feel better.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Very well written work. It did have the Anapestic tetrameter rhythm and I found myself almost humming.
The sandpaper-ish people are everywhere. God help us.
I'm glad you feel better.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I really enjoyed your rant, especially as it was written in rhyme, it made it far more exciting. The double, internal, and end rhyme was fabulous. I'm so glad you got it all off your chest! LOL! Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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I really enjoyed your rant, especially as it was written in rhyme, it made it far more exciting. The double, internal, and end rhyme was fabulous. I'm so glad you got it all off your chest! LOL! Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
Comment from dmt1967
This poem made me giggle as I thought back to the sandpaper men that have passed through my life. The only thing I would say is it is in the wrong category. It should be under poetry and not stories. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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This poem made me giggle as I thought back to the sandpaper men that have passed through my life. The only thing I would say is it is in the wrong category. It should be under poetry and not stories. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
Comment from Raul1
It looks like the sandpaper people have taken a huge toll on your life. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good job!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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It looks like the sandpaper people have taken a huge toll on your life. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good job!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Terry Broxson
Congratulations, this is a very creative rant for this contest, good luck. I love the presentation as a poem. The sandpaper people are very visual and something we all can relate to right away. Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Congratulations, this is a very creative rant for this contest, good luck. I love the presentation as a poem. The sandpaper people are very visual and something we all can relate to right away. Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Your title then line above it made me groan since it is a pun of sorts. Yet I chose to move ahead and read this anyway. Well, I thoroughly enjoyed this rant and loved the rhyme scheme throughout. It bounced along merrily and I loved the descriptions of the sandpaper people. You state your case well.
Well done! Thanks for sharing your new word with us. I appreciate your rant and your keen sense of humor and fun.
Jesse
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Your title then line above it made me groan since it is a pun of sorts. Yet I chose to move ahead and read this anyway. Well, I thoroughly enjoyed this rant and loved the rhyme scheme throughout. It bounced along merrily and I loved the descriptions of the sandpaper people. You state your case well.
Well done! Thanks for sharing your new word with us. I appreciate your rant and your keen sense of humor and fun.
Jesse
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging review.