Night Skater
Use these words contest5 total reviews
Comment from Sarah Tummey
This poem makes me think of a teenager doing tricks on his skateboard. The word "Play" in the prompt made me think of a younger child, but I love that you've done something different.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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This poem makes me think of a teenager doing tricks on his skateboard. The word "Play" in the prompt made me think of a younger child, but I love that you've done something different.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Comment from C.A.Currie
Nice use of the words. I didn't know that people skateboarded in the winter. I guess you learn something new everyday- especially when you're almost 70! He must live in California LOL
Hugs & Sunshine from my heart to yours
~ Christine ~
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Nice use of the words. I didn't know that people skateboarded in the winter. I guess you learn something new everyday- especially when you're almost 70! He must live in California LOL
Hugs & Sunshine from my heart to yours
~ Christine ~
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun poem about this lively, active skateboarder who likes to burn the midnight oil! I really enjoyed the action in this short but clever poem, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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A fun poem about this lively, active skateboarder who likes to burn the midnight oil! I really enjoyed the action in this short but clever poem, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Comment from LisaMay
Cool photo. I like how different this is in its setting from other entries, and the fact that the spider is painted on a skateboard rather than being a live spider - very creative. You set the scene well. It was helpful to style the poem in such a way the words are easily found.
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Cool photo. I like how different this is in its setting from other entries, and the fact that the spider is painted on a skateboard rather than being a live spider - very creative. You set the scene well. It was helpful to style the poem in such a way the words are easily found.
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you
Comment from John Ciarmello
Boarding from morning to night. This is a fun piece. I'm not a skateboarder but your piece tells of the freedom of the skater on an empty street at night and what that might feel like. Great imagery.
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Boarding from morning to night. This is a fun piece. I'm not a skateboarder but your piece tells of the freedom of the skater on an empty street at night and what that might feel like. Great imagery.
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you