"Poetry from the Broken Heart"
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Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a heart shattered beyond repairs.
The work highlights the irretrievable nature of the heart; the hopelessness of all the a meliorative measures contemplated upon; and the imperative of coming to the conclusion that the link is lost occasioned by a system out of sync.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with a out of sync disposition.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a heart shattered beyond repairs.
The work highlights the irretrievable nature of the heart; the hopelessness of all the a meliorative measures contemplated upon; and the imperative of coming to the conclusion that the link is lost occasioned by a system out of sync.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with a out of sync disposition.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 23-May-2022
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Much appreciated this well thought out review Lloyd.
And thanks for stopping by.
My next piece is much more serious.
"Uvaide School Massacre!"
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment from Gunner Lil
Excellent. An easy read with wonderful flow.
A great pace with this reader wanting more,
Understand the challenges of the many setbacks
from everyday life.
Prayer and faith can make life easier.
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Excellent. An easy read with wonderful flow.
A great pace with this reader wanting more,
Understand the challenges of the many setbacks
from everyday life.
Prayer and faith can make life easier.
Comment Written 23-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thanks Gunner for stopping by and your wonderful review and blessed comments!
Doctor Ricky