Dark Shadows
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Comment from Wendy G
That was a gripping story, and you have entered very well into the mind of a serial killer (gulp!!). Your story has an excellent chance of success in this contest as you gripped the reader's interest from start to finish. Sending best wishes.
Wendy
Spelling: "wither away " not "whither", and "lying" not "laying"
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That was a gripping story, and you have entered very well into the mind of a serial killer (gulp!!). Your story has an excellent chance of success in this contest as you gripped the reader's interest from start to finish. Sending best wishes.
Wendy
Spelling: "wither away " not "whither", and "lying" not "laying"
Comment Written 13-May-2022
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Well! You have certainly succeeded in crafting a great horror story, that didn't move out of tone by a single step. I am particularly impressed that you managed to do it whilst writing in the first person. I have always understood that to be difficult, and particulaly for the horror/terror/thriller/mystery genres it is reputed as being hard to sustain the mood. You did it. Well done.
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Well! You have certainly succeeded in crafting a great horror story, that didn't move out of tone by a single step. I am particularly impressed that you managed to do it whilst writing in the first person. I have always understood that to be difficult, and particulaly for the horror/terror/thriller/mystery genres it is reputed as being hard to sustain the mood. You did it. Well done.
Comment Written 12-May-2022
