Comment from
GARY MACLEAN
Couldn't have said it better. I have never been a proponent of 'dangerous sport'. Maybe my inherent meekness has kept me alive for these 70 some odd years, but I prefer that, over tumbling from the sky to a smashing end. Thanks for the entry and good luck.
Comment Written 12-May-2022
Comment from
Carolyn Dooley
This would be a horrible death. And it happens. I would hate to be spectator watching this play out. And the mother living the horror everyday. This is sad.
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Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
Those are the risks of a dangerous pastime. Most mothers would have their hearts in their mouths.
Comment from
Goosey Gander
I really enjoyed your poem! I love the rhyme scheme that you chose, and I wish you luck in the contest! Thank you for sharing! And oh, this poem is so sad!
-GG
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022