Comment from l.raven

Excellent

that's so sweet...my kind of guy...
wives and husbands both nag...but
it's that special love that leaves them brag...

love your poem...prefect picture...
very nicely written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 06-May-2022

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reply by the author on 06-May-2022

Thank you, Linda

reply by l.raven on 06-May-2022

your so welcome Bill...love xxoo

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Aren't you sweet? She must be a treat. i find mine the same way especially when I consider how much she pays to keep me, the clown, around. They both are simply amazing, me thinks.

 Comment Written 06-May-2022

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reply by the author on 06-May-2022

Thanks, Tom

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Good

Good entry for the Two Line Poetry Contest. I like the presentation.

Your second lines needs some editing. I like humor but the sentence syntax doesn't make sense.


but my wife only leaves me bragging (--)>delete< about her.

****But my wife only let's me brag about her.****

Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 06-May-2022

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reply by the author on 06-May-2022

Thank you, Gypsy

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

What a lucky lady you have. You must treat her with kindness. Many men do say their wife nag. But why do they nag? That is the only way they get their man's attention sometimes.

 Comment Written 05-May-2022

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reply by the author on 05-May-2022

Thanks, Rosemary, forgiving this a look.

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This is an extremely witty poem in two lines. It just goes to show the power of brevity, and that beating one's audience over the head with a surfeit of words really isn't necessary.

 Comment Written 05-May-2022

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reply by the author on 05-May-2022

Thank you, Kate

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Well you must have an amazing wife here and I never nagged my husband once as nagging never works if only serves to do the opposite of what you intend, fine words of love and admiration here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-May-2022

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reply by the author on 05-May-2022

Thanks. Dolly

reply by the author on 08-May-2022

Thanks. Dolly

Comment from leather

Excellent

For this poem, she should brag about you. What a compliment. I enjoyed it. I also liked the simple line-illustration. Your positive attitude is refreshing too.

 Comment Written 05-May-2022

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reply by the author on 05-May-2022

Thank you, Leather.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Good idea to stay on her good side, right?
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author.
I like the cross rhyme nagging/bragging.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 04-May-2022

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reply by the author on 04-May-2022

Thank you, Jan

Comment from KJ

Excellent

Hope this is inspired by personal experience- and if so, I am so happy for you :-) Wives have sometimes got a bad wrap in the past!!!

Hope your wife smiled when she read/heard this!

 Comment Written 04-May-2022

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reply by the author on 04-May-2022

Thank you, KJ

Comment from R. Marc Goodson

Excellent

Love it! My wife works in a job that most think of as a male occupation. She has been in very dangerous, life-threatening situations, and yet she is still the same person I married, loving, caring for others, giving of herself. I don't know what my life would have been like without her.

 Comment Written 04-May-2022

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reply by the author on 04-May-2022

Thank you, RM