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Verse and Story for 2022

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poems, stories

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Comment from Sarah Tummey
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What a beautiful poem. You've nailed the syllable count, and your words capture the season. I like how it goes chronologically through the months of spring.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
    Dear Sarah, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Nice poem for the Etheree writing prompt entry. A beautiful rendition of Spring in New England and the awe-inspiring displays by nature. Well-written and well done.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
    Dear Theodore, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
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It is amazing how many new poetry forms I have run into on this site. The Etheree is a new one for me. You have done a good job in adhering to the formula.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
    Dear Paul, thank you for your comments and review. Etherees are very relaxing to compose. Try one sometime!