April Fool
Contest Fiction 9 Sentence27 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
Let us live in April Fool for 364 days a week. One day of reality would be such a shake up. You have a good heart. Well thought out. Clearly written story. Excellent work.
Stay safe and strong :)
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Let us live in April Fool for 364 days a week. One day of reality would be such a shake up. You have a good heart. Well thought out. Clearly written story. Excellent work.
Stay safe and strong :)
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
Comment from country ranch writer
Beg my pardon there is no such thing a way free world due to the greed that people have and feel they are entitled like it's an automatic right. Wrong!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Beg my pardon there is no such thing a way free world due to the greed that people have and feel they are entitled like it's an automatic right. Wrong!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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T.y. Please my wise writer explain your point of 1 sentence review of my work for I understand nothing, no meaning to your 1 line sentence, I mean, what is your point is not clear to me, please, please explain or simply write the meaning of your 1 line sentence.
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
(Daniel Ray)
Comment from karenina
I have no reason to doubt your sincerity or your vision. Would those mortal men lay down their arms and surrender to a higher purpose?
It is the foolhardy mortal who believes the one with the most weapons wins! I may have strayed from your detailed review instructions ~ but this is what you've inspired. Peace,
Karenina
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I have no reason to doubt your sincerity or your vision. Would those mortal men lay down their arms and surrender to a higher purpose?
It is the foolhardy mortal who believes the one with the most weapons wins! I may have strayed from your detailed review instructions ~ but this is what you've inspired. Peace,
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
I haven't been fooled in a few years on April fool's day. That said, you'll have to forgive my lack of comprehension regarding your entry. In which case I will have to decline a like or dislike. Who am I to say what thoughts may spill over into a writer's pen hand.
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I haven't been fooled in a few years on April fool's day. That said, you'll have to forgive my lack of comprehension regarding your entry. In which case I will have to decline a like or dislike. Who am I to say what thoughts may spill over into a writer's pen hand.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. April fools comes around yearly and yes, there are a lot of innocent pranks. There is only one way to make sure you aren't fooled in life and that is with God's guidance.
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. April fools comes around yearly and yes, there are a lot of innocent pranks. There is only one way to make sure you aren't fooled in life and that is with God's guidance.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
Comment from NaughtieScribe
After reading this work I completely understand why it was awarded a recognized status. Noah too was believed to be a fool for his claim that God told him to build an ark. Proven history has show remnants of the actual ark. Being shown images of a world we all hope for via the modern media available is also not foolish. I found this work eerily pertinent and well written. Thanks for sharing.
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After reading this work I completely understand why it was awarded a recognized status. Noah too was believed to be a fool for his claim that God told him to build an ark. Proven history has show remnants of the actual ark. Being shown images of a world we all hope for via the modern media available is also not foolish. I found this work eerily pertinent and well written. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
Comment from Ulla
Yeah, first of April roles up every year and we all have to look out so we don't get fooled. You've written a poem for the contest on that theme, and I wish you the best of luck. Ulla
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Yeah, first of April roles up every year and we all have to look out so we don't get fooled. You've written a poem for the contest on that theme, and I wish you the best of luck. Ulla
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
Comment from Versch
Someone always tries to trick me on April fool's day but never succeeds. For I never forget the first of April for what it is. But I've known other people who can easily be fooled and sometimes can get ugly when someone is fooled. Good luck in the contest. Ver
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Someone always tries to trick me on April fool's day but never succeeds. For I never forget the first of April for what it is. But I've known other people who can easily be fooled and sometimes can get ugly when someone is fooled. Good luck in the contest. Ver
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
Comment from Sanku
Fortune favours fool..so goes a saying .Sometimes it is 'fortune favours the brave'.
WE see fools and not so braves with fortune smiling on them. But then God has certain designs ,,He knows who is a fool and who is not.
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Fortune favours fool..so goes a saying .Sometimes it is 'fortune favours the brave'.
WE see fools and not so braves with fortune smiling on them. But then God has certain designs ,,He knows who is a fool and who is not.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Every year, I pull an April Fools' trick on my oldest daughter. She always falls for the trick. This year, she tried pulling a trick on me. It did not work
So later on in the evening, I got her back. She fell for my trick once more. Thank you for posting. I enjoyed reading your post.
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Every year, I pull an April Fools' trick on my oldest daughter. She always falls for the trick. This year, she tried pulling a trick on me. It did not work
So later on in the evening, I got her back. She fell for my trick once more. Thank you for posting. I enjoyed reading your post.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022