Your Heart Gave me Hope
A repetition Poem10 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A thoughtful poem about finding a love relationship. It is well written with an effective repeated line. Sending good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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A thoughtful poem about finding a love relationship. It is well written with an effective repeated line. Sending good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A heart is an organ that gives us life. We could not live without a heart. It is the most precious thing God created when he created the human being. To find comfort in someone's heart probably is when we donate the organ so they could live on after we pass.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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A heart is an organ that gives us life. We could not live without a heart. It is the most precious thing God created when he created the human being. To find comfort in someone's heart probably is when we donate the organ so they could live on after we pass.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Repetition writing prompt contest. The rhymes do not seem forced and your poem flows well. It draws upon emotions and it presents strong images. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the Repetition writing prompt contest. The rhymes do not seem forced and your poem flows well. It draws upon emotions and it presents strong images. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. I like your repeated line I found my life. Nice presentation background colour and font . Great photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. I like your repeated line I found my life. Nice presentation background colour and font . Great photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Your welcone
Comment from jessizero
This was a very sweet, romantic poem. You followed the prompt and did a great job. I love your repeating line. Thank you for sharing this here. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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This was a very sweet, romantic poem. You followed the prompt and did a great job. I love your repeating line. Thank you for sharing this here. Best wishes.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Paul McFarland
A really good job with a very difficult prompt. I hope you gave this to that special person.
Now I was hooked right from the start.
A pleasant glow within my heart.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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A really good job with a very difficult prompt. I hope you gave this to that special person.
Now I was hooked right from the start.
A pleasant glow within my heart.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery Poet, a Good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your Repetition writing prompt entry, I think you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Hello mystery Poet, a Good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your Repetition writing prompt entry, I think you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Finn Garaham
Opening your essay by asking a question from the reader is a great way to provide a hook statement. Ask your reader something that can make them visualize and think about it in their minds. A question hook is an effective way to capture the reader's attention.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Opening your essay by asking a question from the reader is a great way to provide a hook statement. Ask your reader something that can make them visualize and think about it in their minds. A question hook is an effective way to capture the reader's attention.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet and well composed poem with good rhymes and flow and a sheer roy to read, a good entry for the contest and the sentiments here are warm and loving, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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This is a sweet and well composed poem with good rhymes and flow and a sheer roy to read, a good entry for the contest and the sentiments here are warm and loving, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Marienkiefer
Hello,
A moving piece. Your imagery evokes, for me, sweet surrender, hope and love. Good rhyming scheme and consistency in structure. Good use of vocabulary and of contrast.
Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Hello,
A moving piece. Your imagery evokes, for me, sweet surrender, hope and love. Good rhyming scheme and consistency in structure. Good use of vocabulary and of contrast.
Well done.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, and Hello to you